Using the renders shown in the previous post the page layouts were created following the script. When these were finalised the characters were sketched in ready for painting.
While painting this page I wasn't happy with the way the page was flowing. It felt very cluttered on the middle/left area between panel 2 and 3. By swapping page 2 and 3 and moving El Gigante in panel 1 this issue was resolved. Panel 1 now has a more dynamic feel while providing more space for dialogue. El Capitan breaking out of panel 2's border is now more apparent and overall the dialogue outlined in the script os not affected.
There is still a bit of work to do on the pages in general, such as in panel 4 the eyes need to be fixed then narration and speech will be added.
No comments:
Post a Comment